Tuesday, November 4, 2008

wat ive achieved ( in poetry)



i tend to seek for something i think its there,


knowing that its in my surrounding i wouldn't dare,


dare to leave it, dare to loose it, no that i went to far,


i thank the lord for making me a star,




each time i achieve it makes me strong,


this makes me believe of were i belong,


i know i can reach, i know i can!


i also no that nothing could stop me, for who i am,


let me fly, let me be free,





let me go find my true destiny,
for what i no that every one can achieve their dreams,


just keep on trying and believe.

3 comments:

Twinkle said...

Hey! Julie, I like your poem and the pics. keep doin' good and you will b able 2 accomplished your goals. Nice poem though. XD. T/C/C/I/C.

Guadalupe said...

hey julie, that's a nice peoms u wrote maybe one day u will become a great poet like me <.<'ply!....
leters, lupe

Jessica A. said...

hey julie well i like your poem! i think you write really good poems you should become a poetry. i like the pictures you put in the post .